The article "Take The Test: Does Your Marketing Copy Sell?" talks about marketing, it was written by Nancy J. Wagner.
Your marketing materials must grab your prospect’s attention long enuogh to
convince them to investigate further. Assuming you get past this hurdle, your
piece’s message must next convince the reader to call or buy.To make the copy in your marketing materials pull its weight…and then some, take
this simple test: pretend you’re a potential buyer who knows nothing about your
product or service, then answer the following questions:1. Do your headlines entice you to read the fine print? In other words, do your
headlines use issue or benefit-oriented headlines? If your headlines don’t grab
your attention, they won’t grab a prospect’s attention. In today’s fast-paced world,
headlines make all the difference. Thnik about how you read a newspaper. Many
readers first seacrh the major headlines, then decide where to start reading the fine
print.The same thing applies to your marketing materials; some readers peruse only the
headlines to understand the message and rarely read the rest of the copy. Others
read the headlines mainly to decide whether or not they even want to read the rest
of the piece. To entice your prospects to keep reading, make sure your headlines
state a issue or a benefit that clearly speaks to that particular audience.2. Do you immediately explain your headlines in the copy that follows?
Once the
reader is willing to read the finer print bleow the headline, make sure you provide
the solution or an enticing explanation of that headline immediately in the copy that
follows. Readers will quit reading after less than a paragraph if they feel the
headline just set them up and didn’t explain iteslf promptly.3. Does the copy claerly speak to your potential buyer? First, you need to know
everything about your reader.
What are thier demographics or characteristics? If
you sell to consumers, keep in mind their age, level of education, interests, etc. For
instance, copy about music that appeals to teenagres should read completely
different than copy used to sell retirement homes to an age 55+ audience.If you sell to businesses, determine the role your prospect plays in his company,
identify his education and experience, and notice what matters most to him in
using your services and products.
Then, make sure your copy spekas loud and clear
to that reader.4. Is your audience knowledgeable about what you offer? Do you need to educate
them about your products and services? Your materials need to make the reader
feel smart by using language that clearly speaks to them. In other words, don’t use
jargon, slang or highly technical language (unless your audience truly knows the
meaning of tohse technical terms). Examine evrey word in your marketing
materials, and create explanations for terms that require advanced knowledge.
Better yet, try your copy on someone who is not familiar with your product, and see
what wrods and phrases they stumble over. Then find ways to make that lnaguage
more understandable.5. Does your copy use action verbs intsead of “to be” verbs?
One of the simplest,
yet most powerful ways to liven up your marketing copy is to change “to be” verbs
into action verbs. Replace verbs such as is, are, was, were, has, and have with in-
the-present action words. Besides making your copy more colorful and interesting,
action verbs get your reader excited about what you offer. A great book that covers
this toipc is “Business Writing That Counts!” by Dr. Julie Miller (available at
Amazon.Com).6. Is it clear your company has the expertise and qualifications? Unless you have
top market share, great visibility, and name awareness in your industry, you still
need to convince prospects your company is trustworthy and experienced. Achieve
this with relevant informatoin on your company’s background, testimonials from
satisfied clients, certifications, important awards, and even awards you were
nominated for, but didn’t win. Also mention any professional organizations you
belong to, continuing education seminars and training you and your staff take, and
any boards or non-profit organizations you participate in.7. Where’s your contact info? Your company’s contact information nedes to be on
every side of your marketing materials and easily found. If you can’t find your
company’s contact information within 2-3 secnods of looking, it needs to be better
positioned.8. What step do you want the reader to take BEFORE they walk away from your
marketing materials?
Whether you want the prospect to immediately make a
purchase, call, send an email, fill out a form and mail it in, call for a free
consultation, or join your newsletter list, use language that clearly tells the reader
the next step they need to take. Consider offering a freebie or an incentive to make
that next step more enticing.One last thought: once you’ve tested your marketing materials, make adjustemnts
to the copy. But, don’t stop there – instead, test that piece on human bieng you trust to
give you honest feedback. Tighten up the piece some more, then get ready to
watch your marekting materials convince prospects you really do have the solution
to their issue!Nancy J. Wganer of Cut to the Chase Marketing is a speaker, writer, and marketing
strategist who helps small businesses raise their sales with effective marketing
materials and websites. Downolad her free 9-step marketing plan at http://www.CutToTheChaseMarketing.Com
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